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Vocal Production Notes

to the KyPoetry recording of the poem, The Poet, written by Kylyra

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The Poet


In the dustbin of the world

The poet lies bleeding

Railing against the light

Against the night-blooming poison

Stealing sacred dreams

And dew-fresh flowers.

His hands foreign things

His mind a maze of menace

To his soul;

He lost his words to the wind.

The moon judges him coldly,

A pencil shaded figure

Vomiting black ink.

The poet is no more;

Only the dust remains.

I used five vocal tracks on this piece. Most notable is my attempt to split this poem into two separate viewpoints. I used one vocal track with my usual room reverb for the poet's voice. This voice speaks the second stanza:

Railing against the light

Against the night-blooming poison

Stealing sacred dreams

And dew-fresh flowers.

which discusses the conflict from the poet's perspective. This voice is also used on the stanza:

The moon judges him coldly,

A pencil shaded figure

Vomiting black ink.

This was done to capture the feeling that people who have died and returned to life often describe: they have memories of floating above their bodies, looking down on themselves. This is how the poet sees himself in that moment: coldly lit by the moon, shaded in darkness, vomiting blood that looks black in the night. The second main speaking voice has a downward pitch shift and delay effect added. This is the voice of the moon and the universe. I wanted it to carry an omniscient aspect to it, a depth of wisdom not included in the poet's voice. This voice states the title of the poem, subtly reinforcing the idea from the start that this poem is told retrospectively; the poet is already dead and cannot speak.

(continued on page 2)

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